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08-08-2023 02:59 PM
08-08-2023 02:59 PM
Deattached
As my eyes circle the world everything in it is just nothingness there was no life left in my eyes to be attached to the world, the fear that flows through my veins feels so surreal leaving me living in a world that seems like fantasy and leaving my soul lost in an abyss of darkness that course's through my vain mind drowning it in lies, I started losing strength from mental to physical, I was exhausted
-brynley
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08-08-2023 03:17 PM
08-08-2023 03:17 PM
Re: Deattached
Hey @Brynley
There's some intense feelings there. It's quite poetic. Is it poetry? Your words are quite powerful.
Take care
Hanami
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08-08-2023 06:17 PM
08-08-2023 06:17 PM
Re: Deattached
Thank you so much and yes it is I try to write poetry
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08-08-2023 06:38 PM
08-08-2023 06:38 PM
Re: Deattached
Incredible way with words @Brynley. Do you find it cathartic to write poetry like this? Also here to chat if you're having a tough time atm.